This is an exercise in making a TOK essay


Download the file below and then we will examine from three aspects. YOU will grade the work by highlightlin in word the parts of the essay that:


Linkage to question which will be highlighted in green
TOK vocabulary used correctly highlighted in yellow
TOk vocabulary used incorrectly highlighted in red

Also comment on where you think a better point could of been made.


Student work Unannotated
Student work annotated